First Script

This is the first draft I have created for our film trailers script, both Luke and I have created our first draft screen play and we plan to combine and use both as a means to create a better script as a joint effort.


First Sequence
(Over the shoulder Mid to Close shot of protagonist (Toby) Made to look like He is Filming a Vlog)

Toby: Is this thing on?... (Sits back in chair, relaxing, but on edge)

(Music Starts - Slow with fade in)
(Camera fades to black then re-enters on a track/Panning side on shot of Protagonist walking)

(Voice Over) Toby: I think it started when I was a kid, growing up around my deadbeat parents who would rather light up then go out. I promised my self that I would never be like them but I guess all the time I spent fighting it just ended up with me falling harder.


Second Sequence
(Music picks up pace and matches the cutting of the shots)
(Sequence of drug related imagery at fast continuous pace)

Toby: I love the hits man, but only when they last.
Toby: They get fewer and fewer every time.
Toby: I need this, I crave it and I will do whatever it takes to get it.


(Music remains fast paced)
(Sequence of shot of over the shoulder shots of protagonist faced with danger)


(Voice Over) Toby: When you’ve been in the ‘game’ as long as I have you begin to realise when shit's going down. If you fail to notice it quick enough you could be fighting for your life or worse pride.

Third Sequence
(Music slows, shots speeds down)
(Over the shoulder Mid to Close shot of protagonist (Toby) Made to look like He is Filming a Vlog)

Toby: If you're like me then we I comes down to it remember this, to get what we need you have to get good mates who share your struggles.


(Music explodes to life showing Protagonist from behind facing off against a group of people, then a group of people line up with protagonist, groups walk towards each other)
(Middle man points at Protagonist)


Creegan: You’re finished Scott, Now I’m gonna kill you.


(Cut to Black)

Fourth Sequence
(Over the shoulder Mid to Close shot of protagonist (Toby) Made to look like He is Filming a Vlog)
(Slow Panning shot to protagonists face)


Toby: My names Toby Scott and this is my story....
(Cut to Black)